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eduardoritos
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Post: # 16102Post eduardoritos

With some Vai-Metheny chords on some parts, but rocker overall.


https://eduardozr.bandcamp.com/track/your-heart



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Dinosaur David B
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Nice. I like the melody guitar part a lot better when there's the backing track under it.
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eduardoritos
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Dinosaur David B said:


Nice. I like the melody guitar part a lot better when there's the backing track under it.


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Me too.

But nuding the melody first make it bigger with the rest, after, like growing up.


I'm open to some changes, still. But it's pretty done.



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mr_crowley
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Post: # 236907Post mr_crowley

I knew at the first chord I would love this, bad ass!


For feedback I'd say I humanize the drums a bit, they sound very stiff and programmed as is, change 'em up a bit and you got yourself a killer track :)


Good job, as always. You're such a talented guitar player :+1:
eduardoritos
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Post: # 236908Post eduardoritos

Drums are sligtly humanizef, less than other times, because i'd want a march feel.


I can try some more.
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This was cool, I hear the Metheny thing.
eduardoritos
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Cyberattack said:


This was cool, I hear the Metheny thing.


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It's very obvious.

The PM30 seconds gave me three days of thinking in no other thing but "wtf can I put after the second melody".


It's that self torture efect why I dont like writing songs.


And could be way worse in the concurence of "writing lyrics affaire".
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Mi first thought with this song was that it would go great in a Rocky or martial arts type movie in a training montage scene.
eduardoritos
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M11 said:


Mi first thought with this song was that it would go great in a Rocky or martial arts type movie in a training montage scene.


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Yes, it could be.
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