Dinosaur David B said: Nice. I like the melody guitar part a lot better when there's the backing track under it.
Cyberattack said: This was cool, I hear the Metheny thing.
M11 said: Mi first thought with this song was that it would go great in a Rocky or martial arts type movie in a training montage scene.
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-- David St. Hubbins.
But nuding the melody first make it bigger with the rest, after, like growing up.
I'm open to some changes, still. But it's pretty done.
For feedback I'd say I humanize the drums a bit, they sound very stiff and programmed as is, change 'em up a bit and you got yourself a killer track
Good job, as always. You're such a talented guitar player
I can try some more.
The PM30 seconds gave me three days of thinking in no other thing but "wtf can I put after the second melody".
It's that self torture efect why I dont like writing songs.
And could be way worse in the concurence of "writing lyrics affaire".