New song

With some Vai-Metheny chords on some parts, but rocker overall.


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  • Nice. I like the melody guitar part a lot better when there's the backing track under it.
    I ain't falling for no banana in the tailpipe.
  • eduardoritoseduardoritos Posts: 3,446
    Nice. I like the melody guitar part a lot better when there's the backing track under it.
    Me too. 
    But nuding the melody first make it bigger with the rest, after, like growing up. 

    I'm open to some changes, still. But it's pretty done. 


  • mr_crowleymr_crowley Posts: 6,582
    I knew at the first chord I would love this, bad ass! 

    For feedback I'd say I humanize the drums a bit, they sound very stiff and programmed as is, change 'em up a bit and you got yourself a killer track :) 

    Good job, as always. You're such a talented guitar player :+1: 
  • eduardoritoseduardoritos Posts: 3,446
    Drums are sligtly humanizef, less than other times, because i'd want a march feel.

    I can try some more. 
  • This was cool, I hear the Metheny thing.
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  • eduardoritoseduardoritos Posts: 3,446
    edited October 2019
    This was cool, I hear the Metheny thing.
    It's very obvious. 
    The PM30 seconds gave me three days of thinking in no other thing but "wtf can I put after the second melody". 

    It's that self torture efect why I dont like writing songs.

    And could be way worse in the concurence of "writing lyrics affaire". 
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  • M11M11 Posts: 815
    Mi first thought with this song was that it would go great in a Rocky or martial arts type movie in a training montage scene. 
  • eduardoritoseduardoritos Posts: 3,446
    M11 said:
    Mi first thought with this song was that it would go great in a Rocky or martial arts type movie in a training montage scene. 
    Yes, it could be. 
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